Hmm...you can give me your opinion then! I'm still learning, so the critique would be much appreciated.
[Honestly, the more he got his food out there, the better he'd know how he did. Sure he and Basil liked them...but in the grand scheme of things, that only meant so much. So he reached into his pack and pulled out two more, neatly wrapped to avoid getting icing all over his pack, and held them out.]
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[Honestly, the more he got his food out there, the better he'd know how he did. Sure he and Basil liked them...but in the grand scheme of things, that only meant so much. So he reached into his pack and pulled out two more, neatly wrapped to avoid getting icing all over his pack, and held them out.]